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A scene from my first MLP story. Chapter 1

“Since you are busy, I’ll come back tomorrow.  Thank you for your time and sorry for barging in.  Girls, thank you for your help.”  The Alicorn says politely as he heads for the door, when suddenly the door slams open.  A pink flash speed right by, spinning him like a top.

“TWILIGHT!”  The pink flash calls out.  The sudden outburst surprises Spike, causing him to jump in shock and drop the books right on top of the dizzy stallion.

“Pinkie?” A lavender female unicorn comes trotting down the stairs to see what happened.  She sees her friends, Pinkie Pie, Spike, the Crusaders, and the unknown pony under a pile of books.  Upon seeing the buried stallion she uses her magic to levitate the books off him.

“I’m sorry about this sir.” She turns toward the young dragon. “Spike you shouldn’t carry too many books.  This is what happens when you overdo it.” 

“I’m sorry Twilight. Pinkie startled me.”

Pinkie starts to talk.  “Twilight? Did you hear huh? Did ya? Did ya? We got new ponies in town?  There are two of them. I hear one of them is strange looking and the other even stranger.  Oh Look! There’s one of them right now.”

Pinkie Pie points and Twilight follows the direction toward the standing stallion she was helping.  Looking at him more clearly, her eyes shrink realizing that this pony is actually an Alicorn.  A bit surprised that he was about the same height as her, but that detail was not important at this time.

“Your Majesty.”  She quickly bows.  Upon bowing she loses her connection with the levitating spell, causing the books to crash back down on top of the Alicorn.  He only replies with an ouch and some muttering, earning some giggles from the girls.

*Notes* Minor error, this scene takes place during season 1 - 2 timeframe so Twilight is not an alicorn yet.  Ignore the wing.

Knight © :iconchaosphantom444:
Pinkie Pie, CMC, Twilight Sparkle belongs to Hasbro
Artwork by 
:iconka-samy: the great! 
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BlackHat6 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aw this is cute!~:meow:
zeroviks Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh that got sting awesome pic
ChaosPhantom444 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
zeroviks Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
your welcome^^
Antogames Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2015  Student Interface Designer
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